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I agree with Zigeal

Not a indie game, but anyways! I thought it was good. Some improvement could be made, but hey, it looks good!

Alef321 responds:

ok, so its mainstream.(?)

Trollers gonna troll!

I like it, I dont really see the thing with her arm supposedly being weird and disjointed. The wings look cool, the sword looks fine (maybe have it so that you can put some detail on it, instead of having its blade face the viewer). All in all, I think this really does deserve a 10, considering that there are a billion trolls that are going to attack me afterwards, I gave this my honest opinion.

DragonPunch responds:

Hey, a new troll just popped up! Time to get my spleen repaired...It's going to be a hilarious few months.

Cant wait for the next instalment!

I loved it, that akward question and shes all like "HELL NO!" Bwahahahha, I also loved that forever alone face on the bottom right there

Fifty-50 responds:

Hot Lesbian Action

FIREN MEH LAZERRRRRRR!!!!!!!

Even though I hate sponge bob (not the show, just the yellow moron), I think this is epic

Whysomangry responds:

I'll remove this immediatly

Big difference!

Wowowowowowowow! Colored looks crazy good! I dont really know what to say, other than to say that it looks good!

AnglicanEnvoy responds:

Well thanks for saying anything at all ^^

MEOWTH THATS RIGHT!

This looks like what would happen when Team Rocket has a bad day.... But I know that Jessie and James are not that bad (they sometimes even help Ash & co). I have to say though, this looks so badass and creepy

ZachsAnomaly responds:

I wish they'd stay this way! Team Rapeit! oh wait I misspelled Rocket..

My god..... (GTFO!)

HOLY SHIT SHELLER YOU NEED TO BACK THE FUCK OFF. Excuse me for my language. Now lets point out all the FUCKED UP THINGS THAT SHELLER HAS MENTIONED. Again, sorry for the language. First, the eyes look great! they do not at all look like saucepans. The hands look in the right place and not at all twisty, the only flaw I someone might mention would be the sharpness of her right hand. The face, with the eyes looking great and the slightly curved mouth, looks right on target with the serious but not scary look. The hair looks fine, its just hair that is flowing outward (maybe a few parts in the hair would make it look even better). Lastly, oh! look! Japanese at the bottom. This signifies that the author is intelligent enough to write in a different language! Overall, I have to say this looks really good! SO STOP YOUR FUCKING RANTING SHELLER. IF YOU DONT LIKE THE ART, THEN GET THE FUCK OUT OF HIRYUGOUKI'S ARTBOOK.

*Please excuse me for my language, some things just needed to be said

DragonPunch responds:

Please just be honest...It sucks.

Improvements are always good

Even if it is a resubmission, I think its good that you did this. You are using what people thought were wrong and fixed them (eg. the horn looks like its coming from her hair). This one does look better than the last I have to say.

*also, just a note on the side. I hope people are not being biased by the below reviews... it seems like all the negative reviews are grouped together for all this guy's art submissions.

DragonPunch responds:

Thanks a bunch!

Appropriate name under my comment

and the Rage comments continue......
I say this looks ok. Sure there are problem spots and things that need to be worked on, but hey, this isnt getting published in millions of books world-wide now is it? I have seen that people have noted on the thumb being stuck-on. I think that is true and needs to be moved up a bit more to a more natural place. Shading seems to also be a big issue here. I say that there already is some good shading, just not enough for the people here to accept, so my only advice is to try and integrate more shading next time for the tough audience. I want to say that the hair will need to be more detailed and shaded (part of her hair moves to brush above her side, I think you should add lines to show the parting of hair). I have noticed that the lines are better than last time! The background does look a little strange with the open water and pink grass, but hey, maybe this is in a different world where pink grass grows with open seas.

Overall the least I would put this as is average-good. I have seen a LOT worse on newgrounds art. I would really hope that people would not be such harsh on criticism (let alone the people who just state that the art is bad without reason). If you think the art is bad, then explain why it is bad. You can not just go around hating someone because they draw anime stuff, thats just ignorance.

DragonPunch responds:

Yeah, I see your point. The thumb seems to be bothering me a little too. But, what can you expect from a site that doesn't have that great of an artist community? I mean, even DA is a lot friendlier.

lol, she doesnt like it?

wow, the pose is epic and natural looking.... this has got to be the best one yet!

*plz dont draw her back to normal... she looks better this way!

Jcdr responds:

She's proud of her flat chest.

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