I agree with Zigeal
Not a indie game, but anyways! I thought it was good. Some improvement could be made, but hey, it looks good!
I agree with Zigeal
Not a indie game, but anyways! I thought it was good. Some improvement could be made, but hey, it looks good!
ok, so its mainstream.(?)
Cant wait for the next instalment!
I loved it, that akward question and shes all like "HELL NO!" Bwahahahha, I also loved that forever alone face on the bottom right there
Hot Lesbian Action
Big difference!
Wowowowowowowow! Colored looks crazy good! I dont really know what to say, other than to say that it looks good!
Well thanks for saying anything at all ^^
Improvements are always good
Even if it is a resubmission, I think its good that you did this. You are using what people thought were wrong and fixed them (eg. the horn looks like its coming from her hair). This one does look better than the last I have to say.
*also, just a note on the side. I hope people are not being biased by the below reviews... it seems like all the negative reviews are grouped together for all this guy's art submissions.
Thanks a bunch!
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and the Rage comments continue......
I say this looks ok. Sure there are problem spots and things that need to be worked on, but hey, this isnt getting published in millions of books world-wide now is it? I have seen that people have noted on the thumb being stuck-on. I think that is true and needs to be moved up a bit more to a more natural place. Shading seems to also be a big issue here. I say that there already is some good shading, just not enough for the people here to accept, so my only advice is to try and integrate more shading next time for the tough audience. I want to say that the hair will need to be more detailed and shaded (part of her hair moves to brush above her side, I think you should add lines to show the parting of hair). I have noticed that the lines are better than last time! The background does look a little strange with the open water and pink grass, but hey, maybe this is in a different world where pink grass grows with open seas.
Overall the least I would put this as is average-good. I have seen a LOT worse on newgrounds art. I would really hope that people would not be such harsh on criticism (let alone the people who just state that the art is bad without reason). If you think the art is bad, then explain why it is bad. You can not just go around hating someone because they draw anime stuff, thats just ignorance.
Yeah, I see your point. The thumb seems to be bothering me a little too. But, what can you expect from a site that doesn't have that great of an artist community? I mean, even DA is a lot friendlier.
lol, she doesnt like it?
wow, the pose is epic and natural looking.... this has got to be the best one yet!
*plz dont draw her back to normal... she looks better this way!
She's proud of her flat chest.
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